its not bad, still does need a little work tho
but dont take it from me im not that good at art
I’d say it’s pretty cool! 
I feel the need to add something, but I don’t know what.
Uh, I like the design but it could use polish, like perhaps take some time to make the screen a bigger sprite and not a normal 96x64 sprite. You grew the sprite 416x320 pixels so it’s going to look very strange…
Really you could just go to the smallest pixel setting and take out some square corners, and if you still aren’t satisfied, then you could enlarge the sprite and do the same thing.
After the intro, you should make the intro screen fade out instead of just disappearing immediately.
So I tried to fix the screen, but somehow it created more problems for the game. Thanks for the tip tho.
Honestly, some movement would be nice. I assume the title screen is in the middle of a ravine? I think birds usually nest there for easy access to food whilst also being safe from other dangers, so maybe some avian movement.
Also, your logo is cool! What I think you should do is use a ‘label’ UI, so the text is easier to read.
Really good for a starter!
Oh my! I just tried out ‘story mode’! That’s a nice animation!
Really cool! Excited to see what this will become!
The title screen is meant to show darkness reaching to cover light as this is sort of what it’s about, though the idea to use animation is a good one.