This is a game that I came up with because I wanted to create a game with story. Most of my other games are more action and not actually story. This game is like a memorial to the first game that I made on Flowlab.io. The game is about a picket sign (you) and you have to save your friends from the Mineral Army. The characters are kind of weird, but I wasn’t going for a realistic story based game.
Controls: Arrow keys to walk and jump. Z is for throwing arrows at enemies. (Coming Soon) X is for shield which can block an enemy for a short time.
I just hope someone could give me feedback on my game and if anyone has any ideas that I could add into the game later then let me know because the game is only a demo and I was wondering is anyone would like the style of this new game.
To the North: https://flowlab.io/game/play/1190374
I’m not doing any reviews today @ManiacPumpkin , but I’ll try getting to it as soon as possible! Just submit it to Bored Reviews:
forum.flowlab.io/discussion/6828/bored-reviews#latest
The Championship has begun again, so good luck, and have a great day!
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Okay, I put the link into Bored Reviews.
You can also try Magma Manifesto (i don’t have link, but it’s easy to find in reviews section)
Okay, I want all of the feedback I can get.
@ManiacPumpkin hey, your game is really great! some things are awesome, but others can be improved.
-i loved how the opening comes out! it works very nicely.
-story is pretty great, too!
-dont forget to layer objects correctly. for example, my head went behind a cloud when i jumped behind it.
-also, add parallax to your backgrounds! setting objects to the background layer and toning down (or up) the parallax goes a long way.
-lastly, make your art more detailed! atm its pretty basic, and adding simple shades helps more than you think.
overall its a pretty neat and polished game for its phase in development! keep it up!
I added a lot more to the game, I’ve added new textures to most of the blocks for a lot of people said that some of the sprites didn’t fit like others. I had a comment on adding a Logo (which I did). I tried to fix all of the bugs, but sticking to a wall seems to be an issue. If anyone wants to check out my game or give a re-review then I’ll be glad.
I think the new textures look great @ManiacPumpkin ! I suggest some things, though:
- Maybe apply some shading to the main character to be more fitting to the surroundings?
- I can see once at a certain amount of health, the character icon looks as though it is crying. I think you can do one of two things: One, you can make it so the change only lasts only for a second(s), or two, make it so the character itself has a different animation, as if it were broken, to go along with it. I think that would be a cool addition!
- Finally, maybe make something that you can do with the coins? I know you are limited with free, but there is a way. You can use the “position” block to move the player to something like a shop, without using another level. I myself haven’t been able to figure out to make the camera work right, but I think you can manage that!
I wish you luck! This game is going to be something great, I can feel it (most of your games are)! Have a great day!
Well, I was going to add a store later on in the game. The character is in need of a new texture so the shading on it will soon come.
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Oh, I played this! Loved it a lot! Great game! Was sad when demo finished, please continue!
Yeah Maniac Is My Brother
I haven’t even touched that game in awhile. I might have to give it a huge update.