Is this poem about someone on the brink of suicide?
Uh no, though reading that part does seem like it. It was more so meant to mean you’re carrying hope with the ring, but maybe that hope is ruining you or something along those lines
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Ah I see. It was a really nice poem though and I really like it
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I absolutely love this. My best friend is working on becoming an astronaut and I have had my eyes opened to the wonders of space. Thank you for posting this!
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Not part of the solar system series, just something I thought of from a phrase
What If
I flipped coin that landed on heads
What if I flipped it on tails instead
What are the chances I see you again
I think too often about then
I picked a three leaf clover
What if it had been a lucky four
Would it still be over
I think too often about the door
I can’t help myself from dwelling
What if I didn’t have these what ifs
What if there’s a version that keeps going
I think too often of lost gifts
I cracked apart a wishbone
What if it really came true
Would the memories be less prone
I can’t remember a time with a view
I prayed to God that it would leave
What if that would stop the grieve
Would you believe it really happened
I no longer need to feel saddened
I can’t help myself from reminiscing
What if we had been kissing
Where would things be without it all
I wonder if life hadn’t thrown a curve ball
What if things ended better
What if things never stopped
What if things begin later
What if things hadn’t popped
I can’t let it go
Even if it causes all my dwelling
Because it brings all my reminiscing
I don’t want to end the show
I don’t want to address the elephant
What if everything was irrelevant
Would nothing ever change
I wish I could exchange
I think of the future too
What if we met in a few
Who could tell what’d happen then
I try to image and pray amen
“What if” plagues my life
It sounds all too cheesy
What if you held a knife
It’d make leaving so easy
What if… what if… endlessly
Why do I think relentlessly
Just please let it end
Even if I need a friend
“What if” has gone far too long
I can’t help if we were wrong
What if there’s a chance again
I can’t keep waiting till then
But what if…
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I feel like some of these would go GREAT with music. Especially the longer ones that you’ve posted like the flowjam one.
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I might try to compose something for these eventually, though I’m not very good at making music yet
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Flowjam!
The theme is out
Let me tell you what it’s all about
Everything has a price
It’s time to roll the dice
Everything has a price
Don’t make me repeat it thrice
Rushing in isn’t a plan
You need an idea before you start
So think before following the thought caravan
You’ll regret it if you don’t think smart
Risk and reward is the name of the game
So let’s see if it lives up to the fame
Be unique and strange, not the same
Maybe the prize can be yours to claim
But again, let’s not rush in
Most barely know where to begin
Goodluck I wish you all the best
So let’s put those skills to the test!
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I always have an urge to rap these when I read them 
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Bro SAME. I thought I was the only one.
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Thats kinda dark ngl
Which one lol? Some of them are, though I’m trying to mix things up with lighter poems. Though normally when I try to write it lighter it just feels cheesy 
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Yeah fair
“The Disney Movie Syndrome”
Idk
I’m pretty sure that’s illegal and I think my school chromebook is now doomed
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@moderators please don’t ban me
Hi, I’d prefer you don’t revive this topic unless it’s poetry related.
But while I’m here, something I made in a few minutes the other day. (also just reading this back and I messed up the meter lol)
Color Me Blind
Color me blind
What do I find
Addicted to the color
Just go and call her
Not a dog to collar
Missing my silver dollar
Color me blind
I’ve lost my mind
Hair dyed rainbow
My heart goes slow
Resist her glow
I’d sooner woe
Color me blind
At least I’m kind
Lost to only stare
Lungs without air
Lonely somewhere
For that dyed hair
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Here’s a Haiku
Winter Night Flowlab
Winter winds howling,
Code connects the freezing night,
Silent logic blooms.
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here’s something I made back in 8th grade:
the Mario rap
Do you know how Mario’s story began?
He started out as jump man. After that he invited his bro Luigi,
being number two isn’t easy.
Then Mario started savin the princess.
That’s when the series started makin sense.
Mario 64 was not a bore,
the levels had a bunch of new stuff in store.
Mario kart found a way to our heart,
even an old ■■■■ could understand from the start.
Mario Sunshine was the best game at the time,
2018 made mario players happy,
when mario’s hat now was named Cappy.
the flowers talk in mario wonder,
The wonder flower made the game 100 times funner.
pipes that move, and have a nice groove.
Mario an elephant?
Nintendo sure is “intelligent.”
There is so much more Mario lore,
hidden within Nintendo’s core.
Meanwhile, I’ll leave you to get that high score.
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the supposed swear is actually just a bodily function called passing gas/fartin
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You know how some people get inspiration to write books or make games? This dude makes entire POEMS!
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