post a game and I’ll just tell some positives, negatives, and give a total score outta 10
(name from Crigence)
“putting nice and constructive comments in a review changes whether the dev puts your review in” -Magma
(I know it’s a long quote but it’s a true quote)
Hey, I’ll try to get something in here @MagmaDude100 . I’ve got 2 games for you, so these should be able to occupy you till more come in. Here they are:
Note:
Flowlab bugged out with the last book and wouldn’t let me proceed so I didn’t get to finish it
positives:
I’m a sucker for fantasy things
The story hit home from a boy who was told he can’t to a boy saying he did
great background
awesome animations
negatives:
that’s a lot of water
No collectibles to make me feel like I’m REALLY progressing, can you add coins or something to have people do something more than JUST following the story, I mean the books are cool, but are part of the story
Total score: 9/10 Awesome story
Recommendations:
If you both want to and can, make this into a proper steam game on either Indie version of this or using Unity or UE4 (Unreal Engine 4)
Thanks you for the review @MagmaDude100 ! You went pretty in depth, so I know you will be good at reviewing games! I wish you luck as more games come in! Thanks!
Just got done playing @“Biscuit Butter” 's Kid’s Quest
positives:
I love a challenging game because it makes you want to play it more
puzzles that require a specific mechanic that the game has
nice (8-bit?) art, it looked really good
negatives:
not very responsive controls for jumping
opinion: some puzzles were TOO hard (opinion means that you don’t have to fix it but its recommended for new gamers)
opinion: not a very well developed story (once agin, you don’t HAVE to fix it)
Total Score: 8/10
note: i put an extra point to total score cause I’m not good at puzzle platformers
Recommendations:
see if you can fix the jumping issue, if you can’t then it’s probably because I press the up arrow to much that it’s getting worn out
positives:
I like a lot of different genres and endless runner is one of them
Nice beginning showing of the company thing
Amazing original art style, I haven’t seen anything like it
I love how the loading screen shows hints
negative:
I can’t figure out what the bird patterns mean
Total score:
9.9/10
Note:
amazing, simple, and creative all of this make up an endless runner and this game has it
recommendation:
if you can make it less laggy for chromebooks (the only type of computer I can use in my house) then it will be a perfect 10
I added “wisps” to them, you can collect them, but I just need to make a nice looking GUI to show how many you got @MagmaDude100 . And, also, by the way, I really like your review format! This is a great start, so well done!