GAME REVIEW with Lolpinkshep (IS GONE BABY!)

Thanks to @“Johnny boy” for submitting the work in progress “Rise”

Artwork 7/10 The skins look great but the shooting enemies could use sprucing up and the default
saw blade doesn’t really fit also this is a nitpick but there’s a part of the default (spaceship?) that’s off centered

Sound design 8/10 there is only two accessible songs and one inaccessible to this game yet all the songs fit well with there respectful level/gamemodes

game design 8/10 it can be a little cheeky and kill me for no good reason but overall the rise gamemode is great but i will list possible improvements later

Overall enjoyment 7.5/10 this game is a lot a of fun and i know that its a work in progress but this is a great foundation

Possible improvements
-could let the player to move forward and back slowly to not make it too easy
-Add a randomly generated part once you’ve finished the memory section
-add more enemy types
-Make it a mobile app i’ll download it
-Put a mute button
-more music options
-longer rise (like a hard mode)

And the score is 7.75 - 8/10

Here’s a link to my discussion where you can review my game:


@ToastMaster64 Thank you but i’d rather review it on my discussion but i’ll get right to playing it!


Sorry for the misunderstanding, i meant to say that the discussion is where you can find the game :stuck_out_tongue:

What are you talking about (Saw blade) what the heck is that there is no saw blade. Also there is no default spaceship or part of one

Thanks for that review

@“Johnny boy” by default ship i meant the ship you start with in the game sorry and the saw blade was the spike type object im so sorry about that

try my game

Thank you @ToastMaster64 for submitting the game one and only Temple Runner Retro
Play the game yourself!

Artwork 9/10 The sprites in this game are fantastic but all the backgrounds are just recolors of previous backgrounds. Also maybe take out the default tile in the first four levels in level.

Sound design 9/10 The music fits very well and has magnificently composed but some different songs with the same tone for the different the different levels would be great.

Game Design 8.5/10 The levels have great designs but sometimes there’s trolls and its funny the first time but gets plain annoying after and i never felt of real threat of boulders

overall enjoyment 9/10 the title screen confused me when i clicked on the arrow-w-space block and it sent me to the L.A.W.K.S intro but it doesn’t matter that much. My real complaints are the mute button resets every time you die. The pause button doesn’t work half the time. The boulders sometimes disappears for no reason (its apparent in level seven) and no i didn’t have the less boulder upgrade. And worst of all the double jump is inconsistent at best sometimes you’ll jump super high and the next super low and you can even triple jump (witch is very rare yet possible). Also the levels you make in the level editor get deleted once you die

possible improvements: nothing that i didn’t mention earlier but ill put them by priorities
1.double Jump
2.Fix the boulders
3.level editor
4.mute button
5.pause button

Overall score 8.75 its the best rating yet!


We have some contradictory reviews here, magmadude says the boulders are too hard, you say there too easy.

*The Up, W, Space on the title screen is meant to tell you the controls for the game
*cant fix the editor, that flowlab for ya.
*I will fix the pause and mute, thanks for letting me know!

@ToastMaster64 i meant when you press it it brings you to the animation

@“my_name (<_>)” thanks for the submition it will come out this afternoon


@lolpinkshep it’s meant to do that.

@ToastMaster64 oh sorry it took me a second while i was playing to understand to press play.

lol, how?

@ToastMaster64 im kinda stupid

Hey @lolpinkshep I made a game and I need opinions on it. This is it: and this is my discussion on it: I really need opinions on my game and I thought you might be a good place to start. The game is basically my version of Wario Land but you don’t need experience with Wario Land to enjoy or play it. It is supposed to be a modernized (Modernized being made with GBA sprites instead of SNES sprites for Wario) version of Wario Land. Please try it and thanks in advance! :slight_smile:

Also just keep in mind that it is still a work in progress as stated in my discussion.

@TheGameDemon ill try to get it out as soon as possible but @“my_name (<_>)” is next up:)