My Newest Game!

Game Reviews & Feedback
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Here’s my newest game:

Please give some feedback!
I have been working on it for a while and this is only the 2nd time that I have shown it to the public.

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This game you made might be you’re rushing for something or this could be an early access, but I’m just gonna feedback, anyway.

Art:

  • Decoration/Structure: The house, the boat, the shop, the statue and story frame looks nice (even though the story looks uneven), especially the Overrun Palace, it looks insane. Also, I really like the grass, it looks good. [8/10]
  • Player/Enemy: Um, need to provide a lot, such as walking animation, I know, it also was my nightmare because the legs just somehow bothered me because the shape I drew. [4/10]
  • Skills/Slash/Animation Effects: It’s fine but need a little more meticulous would make it better, especially slashes. [6/10]
  • Blocks: tilemap is kinda messed up on connection of the grass (green part), and don’t talk about the rock, it just, uh, nothing to say. [5/10]

Total Art Point: 5.75/10.

Mechanics:

  • Attack/Skills/Movement (Player): Awesome, create many moves and turn the situation around (depends on the player’s skill), absolutely like it. [9/10]
  • Bot (Enemy): … miss slash many times and cooldown slash is so long that I can even slap its face then run away and come back to kill it, so pretty dumb, I guess. [5/10]
  • Health Bar: Sometimes it’s fully white for no reason, idk. [6/10]
  • Shop: Just fine, nothing else, fr. [7/10]
  • Heal: It’s good, but the thing that looks like EXP should have the amount of healing different to others and can easily know it. [6/10]

Total Mechanics Point: 6.6/10

Instruction/Story Game:

  • Story: The plot is still quite rudimentary, lacking depth and too easily to know the end of the game, there are not too many attractive elements (even though many players will skip it). [3/10] (Sorry but it’s my honesty, can’t lie)
  • Dialogue: Not gonna lie, I wonder what is the story behind Ari if I have multiple questions, dialogues to find out, an interesting Easter egg but I can’t find it, man, kinda sukc. [4/10]
  • Instruction: Enough and easy to understand for beginners like me. [8/10]

Total Instruction/Story Game: 8/10

Manage Bug Ingame:

Might be bugs that need to be fix I found:

  • Use at least the amount of loop code and blocks as you can, sometimes you put too many blocks redundantly and can’t even reach to get in there, such as the yellow portal in Lv1.

Overall:

  • Pros: Nice game for the 2nd time you post it to the public.
  • Cons: Still pretty much problems need to be solved.

So, Total Game Point: 6.78/10

In this feedback, it’s all my opinion, not all of them are full certainly good feedback, it could be a few to BUNCH OF PROBLEMS in my feedback (I’m sure it is), and rating point is just for degree of completion progress of the game, and of course, they’re not 100% truth so don’t feel bad about it, I’m also have problem with my project, but you still need to improve it. Thanks for spending time reading this post. Have a goodnight zzz.

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Thanks a lot for the feedback.
Yeah, so there are a few funny bugs I need to fix, and I’ll look into it!

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Also, just out of curiosity, how did you like fighting the boss?

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My chrome book just screaming in the beginning of the game so, not yet.

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Ok. The first level (Actually the 3rd level) is the slowest.