Your a little “darker” than Deadly_Smiles.
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uuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhh its nowhere NEAR little bunny phu phu
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Well, I wouldn’t call it dark,
maybe dramatic, even a little tragic.
But I guess the truth is stark,
I’ll try to make it happier and not as whackier.
But I like long ballads,
I think that point is valid.
But I also like to mix up my style,
and maybe that’ll bring a smile.
I actually like that quick little “poem” I made.
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Did you just poemize your sentence?
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I was Summoned by someone saying someone is darker than me.
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Yes. CodeAlpaca is, scroll up and keep reading his poems its dakrk.
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Go into the search bar and search up “Nursery Nightmares”, my little Bunny Foo Foo is way more darker friend.
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This thing called Love
When I heard your name I smiled
It was truly wonderful this thing called love
I wanted to scream your name at the top of my lungs
For this thing called love had me shriveled in the head
Because you’ll never realize how perfect you were to me,
if only I had the chance.
Wanted to post a different poem, but it was unfinished so I had to post this one. Once again, this is in no way related to my personal life.
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Only allowed to ping 10 people in a single post.
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I thought I would be finished with it, but I got caught up in coding
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well you are the ‘code alpaca’ so i think i shoudve exeptected that.
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I have pop-ups blocked. But please try to keep things on topic, so anything poetry-related.
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aahhhh man.
you see i had made a working virus. 
change the Always to a timer, and the links are View, not Play. Always will only activate the link once, but a timer will repeatedly open the link. Don’t spam this link in threads, but I’m helping because I like code to be good
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Hey Peomist Alpaca nice poems! Cheer 
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nevermind keep doing the dark storys they better.
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I made this one a while ago and wasn’t super happy with it, but I didn’t have anything else to post
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Immortality
Immortality is a dream for fools.
It hopes for a great outcome of society
An outcome that will never come.
It begs the world to change its rules.
But what is the alternative?
To be forgotten in entirety?
To be lost with no notoriety?
To slip away from the world quietly?
Immortality is a dream for fools.
What to do with all the wasted time?
To collect brilliant and worthless jewels?
To create meaningless works of art that rhyme?
To fall in love and watch them die?
To fix the world and then watch it break?
To bring the world to its knees and watch it cry?
To dream of peace and watch the world awake?
I guess that makes me a fool.
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