YEET reviews

OK, so I am not really good at flowlab, and decided it would be a good idea to share my game to the community. I do not have a good sense of making characters, and I bet a lot of people agree. At the time I am making this post, this is a unfinished game. Give me a feedback plz, and I do not care if you sort of have to be harsh, it’s fine. Just plz feedback.

@ACDHRIIVEALS Link please :slight_smile:

oh I always forget:https://flowlab.io/game/view/1410399

I am still adding so it’s just 1 level

Good start, but feels pretty unfinished which is understandable since you just started. My suggestions: Less neon green background and the springs bounce waaay too high (Which is kinda fun tbh) Good luck continuing the game!

Thanks
I will do both. I agree with that neon green, but obviously green will be used on a first level.

I noticed that the second checkpoint doesn’t work once I have gotten the first one. Anyone knows why?
This is what the player is running

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The checkpoint is running this
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The checkpoint is running this
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The players running the top one

You could create your own art instead of the default

I am trying my art skills on a different game, so I will let you know when I am going to start. Player may take a while…

Does using a sprite from flow lab to change the colors count as “Original” art. I hear lots of yes and nos sometimes

Technically yes, but normally it’s best to try out your own art. If youu are new at this, I always recommend this book.
https://www.amazon.com/Drawing-Basics-Video-Game-Art/dp/0823098478