Chest compressions! Necromancy! Instead of typing this, I should be doing something productivemancy!
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here’s a game, it’s far from finished though, just throwing this in there so the topic won’t die
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Ty, I’ll try to get some reviews in after the cotton game jam
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I’m so glad all of you are here to enjoy this review with your grandchildren! I know you guys enjoyed these when you were just a little kiddo and now as a grandparent you should hopefully still enjoy it!
Den and the 9 Kings
By @Faiafokkusu
Reviewed by CodeAlpaca
Art
What I like about the Art
- I like the paper art style
- I love the little animation the grey fox makes when you hit it with paint. You’re not meant to hit it and I think it’s a really nice touch that you added.
- I like the paint meter, but it’s such a similar color to many of the surroundings that I think having it a different color could be good. (Also the display order should be higher so it’s still behind the fox but is higher than the trees or walls)
- I like the waffle stand.
What about the Art could be better
- Some things need more detail. For example, the Fire at the beginning could be a lot better
- The paintbrush doesn’t fit the style of the game.
- The Walls should be different, they don’t match the style of the game
- The hands and buildings also don’t match the style of the fox. Overall I think the game needs a more consistent art style between all the objects
Art Score: 5
Fun
What about the game is Fun
- I think you could have a really clever story when the game is finished.
What aspects could be changed to make it more Fun
- There isn’t a lot to do. It is clear the game is pretty unfinished (I do hope it gets finished, I think it can be really good)
- A way to regain paint would be good.
- A way to see how much paint you currently have would be good.
Fun Score: 3
Sound
What about the Sound I like
- I think the music choice was good.
- The paint effect was chosen nicely
What parts of the Sound could be better
- I just think it needs more sound effects, but that is something that would be added after the main gameplay elements.
Sound Score: 5
Creativity
What I think is Creative
- I think it’s a really cool idea with an art style that could make it even better
What could be improved
- Nothing to really complain about, the game just needs to be finished.
Creativity Score: 6
Overall
Art Score: 5, Could be really good, just needs to be more consistent
Fun Score: 3, Could be really good when the game is finished
Sound Score: 5, Not a lot to go off of, but so far it was picked well.
Creativity Score: 6, I think it’s a really cool idea that I hope is finished
Final Score: 4.75
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I think that’s kinda the point that den is using a real object as a weapon
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It can still fit the art style
No. This is like complaining about real people’s faces being shown a bit for specific Family Guy jokes.
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Darkest Way Home
By @yogergitater
Review by @CodeAlpaca
Art
What I like about the Art
- I like how if the “Start” button hits an enemy they die.
- I like the death effect of the enemies a lot, looks very nice.
What about the Art could be better
- I’m not crazy about the background.
- I think the text font could have been chosen better, and maybe the color.
- I would have preferred a custom HP bar over the basic bar.
- I don’t like using alerts. (Some select individuals will hate on me for not liking it, but I like games that reach their maximum potential, and refusing to make a game look better out of pure stubbornness is not healthy as a game dev)
- The blasts should be larger, it’s a bit hard to see them.
Art Score: 5
Fun
What about the game is Fun
- I just think the game is fun. Not sure what more to say.
What aspects could be changed to make it more Fun
- LMB does nothing? M takes you to the menu, but the other 2 don’t do anything.
- I wish the movement felt a little smoother to control
Fun Score: 6.5 Reminds me of CappsDev game,
Sound
What about the Sound I like
- I like the music choice.
What parts of the Sound could be better
- Movement needs a sound
Sound Score: 5
Creativity
What I think is Creative
- Not sure? I think this is a decently popular idea
What could be improved
Creativity Score: 4
Overall
Art Score: 5, I think it’s a good base, but it could definitely be better
Fun Score: 6.5, Idk, I just like this game (but movement could be better)
Sound Score: 5, Just needs a little more and to be more impactful
Creativity Score: 4, I think rn it’s pretty basic, but it could become unique.
Final Score: 5.125
Overall I like the game, just needs some polishing and a few new features.
I feel so bad reviewing these so late because now these devs are inactive 
I’m really sorry I couldn’t review them sooner, maybe they would have still been here if they had a little more direction
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could you link to the games? I’m having trouble finding the original messages lol
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I updated the last 2 reviews, I am unable to update earlier ones though because it won’t let me edit them
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Thank you for the review! I will finish the game, don’t worry!
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Hey, are you still open for reviews?
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Yes, I am. It’s taking a bit to review things because I’m doing things with my family for Christmas and working on my own game, but I will be getting to all these reviews when I can.
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Thanks for the review Alpaca! I was mostly offline due to being busy and just not being able to work on new games but, I return better than ever! Again thank you for the review and happy coding.
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is this still goin?
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Oh lol sorry forgot. I’ll try to do a review this week
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If it’s all right with you, I would like just a tiny little review when you get the chance for my new game Pellet Pallet!
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Have u done “A Bird RPG”?
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Oh wait sorry for rezing a ded topic, didn’t notice
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